Thursday, September 5, 2019

Trails In Denton

There is a new trail in Denton, and it is open from 11:30 am to 6:00 pm, it also is about 20 minutes from Calhoun Middle School. It is called  North Lakes Park. It cost the city 350,500 dollars to build and has been open for about a month now. The trail is rocky and bumpy it also is only for bikes and goes all around the park. It has tall  green trees all around the trail. This 14-year-old boy, John, loves the new trail. John said,” I try to go there three times every week”. He loves the smell of fresh air and the trees he also loves looking at all the animals while riding by. This lake  is there for people who want to go fishing or just relax by the water. Also for those who like to walk there is a pathway for walkers.

5 comments:

  1. The story is really bland has decent details but wheres the interesting parts of the story. It mostly feels like documentary about the park then isntead about john exploring the park.

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  2. I like how you tell us about how much the building cost. Telling us where the location is so if i want to go i can!

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  3. I like how you in clued how much money they spent on building the park

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  4. i like how you included every activity as if were a brochure for the park

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  5. i like the way you described how the park looked. you could have been more specific on the location

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