Most schools have Pep Rallies to honor future or past events. It was a normal sunny day at Calhoun the students weren't that exciting but some were cause they could have 5 min to be released early. The students were waiting to see what show would be in the Pep Rally. Students were anticipating on seeing their friends. The six graders were more excited than the other grades because it was their first Pep Rally, the energetic students filled the Mac Allister Gym, all the students and teachers on the campus were theirs. The heated gym grew hotter the bleachers were filled with sweaty students still excited about the Pep Rally starting, Jackson has felt the heat and said “ The Gym is hotter than ever. “ As he told the teacher they have told him “ We can't do anything, we don't have control .“ Jackson looked in defeat knowing the teachers couldn't do anything. The teachers then realized it was hot in the gym they have to deal with it for the whole game. The game ended the students left in relief from the gym, one of the teachers went to the office to let them know that the gym’s air conditioner wasn't working. Now they know that the bottom gym may have some difficulty in the air conditioner.
it would suck to be in a gym with sweaty little kids in a enclosed space
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Deletein this story there wasn't really a fail only because it was hot in the gym for who does that count as a fail a fail is when trying to score at a soccer game but failing or in a game when you are the last person standing and you try to pull a clutch that is failing
ReplyDeleteIts not fun being stuck in a hot box with other sweaty kids and the teachers just know realized its hot..........
ReplyDeleteI like how you use/have a more bigger vocabulary using the words anticipating and energetic!
ReplyDeletei like how you use good vocabulary during the story
ReplyDeleteit a great story how do your story i like it
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