Thursday, September 5, 2019
KARMA
There was a junior bull riding championship at the 440 Ranch in Aubrey Texas but the younger kids had to ride sheep instead of bulls because they're really little. At first the game was going smoothly and nobody got hurt yet...until this one kid named Jackson was too little to ride the bulls but he lied about his age so he could go. Then they got him on the bull and the announcer said 3...2...1...GO! The kid only lasted 5 seconds on the bull until he fell off. When Jackson did fall off the bull jumped around and stepped on the kid and broke 3 of his ribs. He was rushed to the hospital immediately, luckily the ambulance was already there in case someone got hurt. Jackson went to the hospital in the ambulance and his parents followed behind them. Everyone went home and the championship was canceled.
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I feel like you could of added more to the story like telling us how the audience and his parents reacted to the situation.
ReplyDeleteThe transations on this story is not good and very bland. I like the details that you put is really gooad like when it said 3 2 1 thats some good details also how he broke his ribs by the bull.
ReplyDeleteI feel like you could have added how old you had to be for the bull ride and also what was his fake age,but overall it seemed pretty good i like the details like when it said the bull was stumping around and crushed 3 ribs and that there was already a ambulance waiting there
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