Drivers don’t pay attention to pedestrians. Over 2,000 people get hit by cars each year in Denton,TX. More of the people on the phone or texting get hit or into accidents.
A local boy, David Valencia, was hit by a car this past Saturday at the mall. He walked out of H&M to the car. But this car was not paying attention to the speed bump and it was 15 mil per hour. He still got hit by a red Mustang, which hit his leg and flipped him over the car. Someone called 911. They rushed the local boy to Presbyterian Hospital, and he left the same night with a cast on his broken leg, but it was not easy to walk.
Drivers need to be more careful of people walking, as well as other cars on the road. Over 50% percent of all Americans will be involved in a vehicle accident in their lifetime, whether it be while as a pedestrian, as a driver, or as a passenger in a car.
It is tragic that this stuff happens and I like how you were very detailed on how phones causes most car accidents.
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ReplyDeleteI love how you gave the audience/reader numbers and percents of how many people have gotten into car accidents. Also how we should be careful and you are very clear about what you are writing about and why!
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ReplyDeletethis was a good topic to write cause it show how many people get hit by car
ReplyDeleteThis was a good topic to write about because it happens a lot and people need to be more careful and like it how you put the number of people who get hit every year.
ReplyDeletei like how it shows the amount that get hit and it tells you about one person who experienced getting hit by a car
ReplyDeletei like how it shows a real life problem.
ReplyDeleteMy mom got in a car accident to so i can relate to your story on car accidents.
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