Thursday, September 5, 2019

Breaking Bad

It was a sunny Wednesday in august, lunch was over kids were going down up and sideways trying to get to their next class. kids yelling playing to try to get their last few drops of energy out of their system. When out of nowhere was Tyler minding his own business got his backpack yanked back by bob that apparently had beef with each other and got a knuckle sandwich right into his head,” Wham”, kids immediately started running yelling screaming trying to see what was going down the whole freaking crowd started to form, around Tyler and bob that were fighting hit after hit did the crowd start yelling and screaming even more, the Tyler who got his backpack yanked got quite a few good licks on bob but unfortunately bob was quicker and faster and made Tyler stop hitting bob and pull his hands to protect his head from getting hit by bob, until finally a counselor came in and stopped the fight, unfortunately, bob and Tyler got suspended and got in trouble by their mom's.

3 comments:

  1. i love how the story is interesting , but their are some mistakes on the story that need to be fix.

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  2. Its a decent story. The fight had barely any details execpt from just punching each other. How long did they get suspended. Why did they have beef over the summer. Not enough explanation

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  3. its a good story and funny

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